Difference: DataLink-1_0-Erratum-2 (1 vs. 3)

Revision 32020-06-12 - MarcoMolinaro

 
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DataLink version 1.0 Proposed Erratum 2: Hanging if clause in §4.3 (text amendment)

Author: Mark Taylor, François Bonnarel

Date last changed: 2020-05-11

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Date accepted: 2020-06-11
 

Rationale

In the process of moving the DataLink-1.0 into the ivoa-std GitHub repo, a sentence in §4.3 (page 22) was spotted that is unclear (see DataLink issue #1). This erratum proposes a small text change (substitute a period with a comma) that makes the sentence meaningful.

Erratum Content

This Erratum proposes to change, in §4.3 of DataLink - Version 1.0 the sentence:

If this SIA service supported querying specific data collections via
a custom parameter named COLLECTION. The following PARAM describes the
custom parameter, including the possible values:

with the following one:

If this SIA service supported querying specific data collections via a custom
parameter named COLLECTION, the following PARAM would describe the
custom parameter, including the possible values:

That is, removing the period after the term COLLECTION, and replacing it with a comma. This change will make the full sentence meaningful.

Impact Assessment

The proposed change doesn't impact any part of DataLink implementations since it simply amends a sentence in the text that was otherwise unclear.

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Revision 22020-05-11 - MarcoMolinaro

 
META TOPICPARENT name="DataLink10Errata"

DataLink version 1.0 Proposed Erratum 2: Hanging if clause in §4.3 (text amendment)

Author: Mark Taylor, François Bonnarel

Changed:
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Date last changed: 2020-05-08
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Date last changed: 2020-05-11
 
<-- Date accepted|rejected: 20NN-MM-DD -->

Rationale

In the process of moving the DataLink-1.0 into the ivoa-std GitHub repo, a sentence in §4.3 (page 22) was spotted that is unclear (see DataLink issue #1). This erratum proposes a small text change (substitute a period with a comma) that makes the sentence meaningful.

Erratum Content

This Erratum proposes to change, in §4.3 of DataLink - Version 1.0 the sentence:

If this SIA service supported querying specific data collections via
a custom parameter named COLLECTION. The following PARAM describes the
custom parameter, including the possible values:

with the following one:

If this SIA service supported querying specific data collections via a custom
Changed:
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parameter named COLLECTION, the following PARAM describes the
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parameter named COLLECTION, the following PARAM would describe the
 custom parameter, including the possible values:

That is, removing the period after the term COLLECTION, and replacing it with a comma. This change will make the full sentence meaningful.

Impact Assessment

The proposed change doesn't impact any part of DataLink implementations since it simply amends a sentence in the text that was otherwise unclear.

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Revision 12020-05-08 - MarcoMolinaro

 
META TOPICPARENT name="DataLink10Errata"

DataLink version 1.0 Proposed Erratum 2: Hanging if clause in §4.3 (text amendment)

Author: Mark Taylor, François Bonnarel

Date last changed: 2020-05-08

<-- Date accepted|rejected: 20NN-MM-DD -->

Rationale

In the process of moving the DataLink-1.0 into the ivoa-std GitHub repo, a sentence in §4.3 (page 22) was spotted that is unclear (see DataLink issue #1). This erratum proposes a small text change (substitute a period with a comma) that makes the sentence meaningful.

Erratum Content

This Erratum proposes to change, in §4.3 of DataLink - Version 1.0 the sentence:

If this SIA service supported querying specific data collections via
a custom parameter named COLLECTION. The following PARAM describes the
custom parameter, including the possible values:

with the following one:

If this SIA service supported querying specific data collections via a custom
parameter named COLLECTION, the following PARAM describes the
custom parameter, including the possible values:

That is, removing the period after the term COLLECTION, and replacing it with a comma. This change will make the full sentence meaningful.

Impact Assessment

The proposed change doesn't impact any part of DataLink implementations since it simply amends a sentence in the text that was otherwise unclear.

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