Please add your validator (even if 1.0) if applicable.
RFC Review Period: 2015-06-30 - 2015-08-18
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Comments from the IVOA Community during RFC period: 2015-06-30 - 2015-08-18
Example Comment (2015 June 30th) by BrianMajor
I comment on these three points:
(Still) a good clearly written document. One or two minor comments/suggestions:
- Notation: I don't understand the usage of curly and round brackets in referencing URL path elements. For instance in sec 2.1.11 I see: "/{jobs}/{job-id}/parameters/(parameter-name)", and in sec 2.2: "/(jobs)/(jobid)", and in sec 2.2.1.1: "/{jobs}/(job-id)". Are () and {} doing different, ahem, jobs here? If not, can you just pick one or the other?
- Sec 1.3: "an XML document (e.g. ADQL, CEA [harrison05])" - is it anachronistic to refer to ADQL in this context since post-ADQL-2.0 there is no ADQL/X representation?
- Sec 2.1: A count indicator ("1") is missing from the Job-Owner link in the UML diagram
- Sec 2.1.3: The phases "HELD", "SUSPENDED" and "ARCHIVED" do not appear in the diagram.
- Sec 2.2: "future versions of this document will add other bindings such as SOAP." Really?
- Sec 2.2: "an non-existant job id" -> "a non-existent job-id"
- Sec 2.2.1.1: "it should not return a response (i.e. block)" is a bit ambiguous. Prefer "it should not return a response (i.e. it should block)"?
- Sec 2.2.1.1: "/{jobs}/(job-id)?WAIT&PHASE=QUEUED": I think it has to be "WAIT=<value>" not just "WAIT"?
- Sec 4.2: "ADQL [1] can serve as a JDL." - bibliography referencing is wrong.
- Sec 4.3: "Call it CEA v2 to distinguish it from CEA v1 as currently maintained by AstroGrid." - it's a bit anachronistic.
- Sec 4.3: "The JDL in CEA v2 is similar to that in CEA v1 It is a formal ..." - missing full stop
- Sec 4.3: "the emerging XForms technology" - is it still emerging?
- Schema:
version attribute to be made optional? (see schema evolution discussion)
-- MarkTaylor - 2015-07-02
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WG chairs or vice chairs must read the Document, provide comments if any and formally indicate if they approve or do not approve of the Standard.
IG chairs or vice chairs are also encouraged to do the same, although their inputs are not compulsory.
TCG Chair & Vice Chair ( _Matthew Graham, Pat Dowler )
Applications Working Group ( _Pierre Fernique, Tom Donaldson )
Data Access Layer Working Group ( François Bonnarel, Marco Molinaro )
Data Model Working Group ( _Mark Cresitello-Dittmar, Laurent Michel )
Grid & Web Services Working Group ( Brian Major, Giuliano Taffoni )
Registry Working Group ( _Markus Demleitner, Theresa Dower )
Semantics Working Group ( _Mireille Louys, Alberto Accomazzi )
Education Interest Group ( _Massimo Ramella, Sudhanshu Barway )
Time Domain Interest Group ( _John Swinbank, Mike Fitzpatrick )
Data Curation & Preservation Interest Group ( Françoise Genova )
Operations Interest Group ( _Tom McGlynn, Mark Taylor )
Knowledge Discovery in Databases Interest Group ( George Djorgovski )
Theory Interest Group ( _Franck Le Petit, Carlos Rodrigo )
Standards and Processes Committee ( Françoise Genova)
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